Pitch for Our Film

We showed a class of year 9's and a class of year 13's, a powerpoint containing a pitch for our film. This involved telling them the storyline and title meaning of our film, showing the general storyboard of our idea, showing our created film logos, and some possible quotes for the beginning of the film opening, and then asking for some opinions. 

Generally, we got positive feedback for film genre and storyline, and they liked the idea. We also got positive feedback from the title of out film, with someone suggesting it was a 'clever idea'. Someone commented that we had a good range of camera shot ideas. The logos we also got positive feedback from, where students of our target audience said they looked very professional and well edited. Some people didn't like the sound on our 'Masquerade' logo, however we'd already changed this on our video edit, and there was a comment made that the background could be darker, however when we tried this, the black mask on our logo didn't look very effective. 

We got a mixture of opinions on the quotes, where the majority however chose a quote that we also liked, and others liked the ending of our most lengthy quote. From this feedback we decided to take both quotes and incorporate them both into the beginning of our film opening.