Before our full feedback, we rendered an incomplete version of the edited video so far and showed it to a small group of students to get their opinions. Our overall feedback was very positive, and some students grasped the conventions we were trying to create such as the killer wearing all black to connote death and mystery, which is a good point. We also got a good reaction to the end clip of the eyes opening, which was described as effective and a good ending to the tension building. There was a suggestion for improvement, which included adding heavy breathing and footsteps sounds to the clip, to add more suspense, which was our original plan anyway, which is also a good point. Later, the clip was shown again to another small group of students who thought the order of the clip was a bit confusing, and in some areas looked more like a movie trailer, which could just be a result of not seeing the whole finished clip, but we shall take these points into account anyway and may create several different films with clips in different orders, and when shown to another audience, we can decide which one is best. Here is the initial short, unfinished video that was shown to our first audience:
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