We made the following changes due to our feedback:
- Changed the music to two tracks called 'Creepy Music Box' and 'Scary Music' where they both sound like eerie music boxes to create a more mysterious atmosphere, and seem to fit with the pace and footsteps of the whole clip.
- Changed the contrast of all the 'inside' clips to make them look darker and creepier.
- Increased all the volumes on speech to make it clearer and easier to hear.
- Improved 'jumpy' clips that didn't run smoothly.
- Cut down the length of the credits clips, to make them not 'drag on' too much and to cut down the length of the whole opening which was over the time limit.
- Cut down clips of the couple walking, to again cut down to within the time limit.
- Changed the date on the transition text, so the clothes of the characters fit better with the time period.
- Cut out the flash of the hooded figure as the couple enter the room, as it seemed irrelevant and too random.
- Changed the text colour and tracking of the title text, to make it fit more with the genre and to seem more eerie and mysterious.
- Cut down all of the clips of the victim and the figures in lab-coats at the end, in order to stay within the time limit
- Added in flashes of the mirror and peacock, in place of the flash of the hooded figure, because they set the scene and are less confusing for the audience.
- Cut out some of the background noise in the speech sounds, such as loud bangs, to make it sound clearer.
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