Year 9 students: http://rosyanncoursework.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/19-feedback.html
Year 12 students: http://libertyshawmedia.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/feedback-from-target-audience.html
From this feedback we have decided to go with the majority of the target audience, and chose to work on version 2 of our drafts, where the title sequence makes sense, where the 'exciting bit' is more at the end. Taking into account the feedback, we will change the clip in the following ways:
- Lower the volume of the sound effects (footsteps and heavy breathing) because they are too loud over the sound of the music
- Make all the fades, through black, instead of through white, to make a smoother transition.
- Change the font of the text to look more strong, creepy or scary, to fit more with the theme.
- Change the quote to all white - the red words look a bit odd. Add in the last part of another Jekyll and Hyde quote, which was suggested in the pitch, to make the idea in the film more clear.
- Add someone reading the quote aloud, to fill the silent space when people are reading it.
- Add in a clip of the victim being happy and introduced to the scene, so the audience can connect more with her.
- Add a clip of the victim actually being bitten, to make the idea of the protagonist being a vampire more clear, as well as achieving the end of the tension build-up. Possibly add sound effects with this.
- Add sound effects to the flashbacks, to make it more clear that they are actually flashbacks.
- Add an 'opening eye' effect over the 'sky' clip to look as if the protagonist is waking up, to make a distinction between the 'setting-the-scene' credits clips, and the actual film opening sequence.
- Make the logos at the start 'wide-screen'.
- Add the production company names to the credits at the start, to show that the logos at the start aren't actually the film name.
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